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:iconkika1983:
interesting idea:) maybe the only weak point is that the viewer needs time to see the smoking bird....something more /besides the cigarette/ that put accent on it maybe some colour ,will do good :)

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I can see your point, thank you for it, and I both agree with you and don´t. It was my intention from the begining to hide the smoker more rather than less, but it did´nt turn out all that well so I made the smoke sort of show where he was a little. But maybe you are right and I sort of got stuck in the middle.
:iconjulialange:
The smoking bird? or the pirate?
Cute birds. *-* I Love it.
:iconjcallius:
Hey... you are on to something.
Thank you!
:iconazbeen:
i really like the patterns you use......cool
:iconjcallius:
I´m glad you like it. Thanks a lot.
:iconconfirmpentecost:
I like the message behind this, nice work.
:iconladyewelyn:
The one with the smoke? Poor birdie.
:iconjcallius:
Thank you very much. I´m glad you like it!

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Well, its a hard life beeing a bird. :laughing:

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