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Short memory by =JCallius:iconJCallius:

Categories Digital Art > Vector > Animals

©2009 =JCallius
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An illustration for the Swedish magazine Säljaren.
It´s for an article about short memory.

Made in Illustrator CS3

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=omgmypony Jul 8, 2009, 9:53:53 AM
I think this is overall very well done, and the fact that it is a published piece speaks well for it. The textures in the goldfish and the circle behind it are very pleasing to the eye. My main criticism of the piece is the question mark. I understand that it is there to tie it to the article that the piece was published in, but the question mark seems very last minute. It's almost as though you submitted the piece without it and the publisher asked you to add it. The rest of the piece is very balanced and makes use of texture. The question mark is kind of off to the side and has no texture to it whatsoever. I think you could have done a lot more to tie it in to the image.
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*MasterStryke Jul 8, 2009, 7:31:28 AM
well done

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*worldcollecter Jul 8, 2009, 7:35:43 AM
Somehow this reminds me on "finding Nemo" :)

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~scottdoom Jul 8, 2009, 7:38:36 AM
The facial expression is great.

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~grunii Jul 8, 2009, 9:48:13 AM
I love the texture of the skin fish!

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~LBible Jul 9, 2009, 7:05:19 AM
It's kinda cute :3 (Someone beat me on commenting on the nice texture XD)

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=JCallius Jul 25, 2009, 11:35:21 AM
Thank you very much!

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=JCallius Jul 25, 2009, 11:35:27 AM
:)

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=JCallius Jul 25, 2009, 11:35:34 AM
:)

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